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Oh, thank you jackle and AllieTheWriter!! I'll work on the wording and did you really think they were puppets?? Maybe I didn't describe them well enough....hmmm...

@ EmiAnne, yes, this is only part one of a five, as in, i have four other parts that I'm still writing. And about the names, I'm going to tell ...

Oh, thank you, Quetseli!! Yeah, I did tend to repeat the whole limping thing a lot and I'll try to fix it so it's not so repetitive. Thank you for ...

Okay, I admit that you did a better job with this edit. It was great that you fixed the beginning part when they're in the house. I like that you ...

Part One Her sigh becomes a lonesome sound echoing off the walls of the abandoned town. Cold air seeps down into her bones, freezing her blood and weighing her muscles. ...

Um, this seems like a good start. But I'm not completely sure about it. The beginning is confusing with the family arguing and the Russell guy totally messing up the ...

To tell you the truth, I was seriously confused when I read it. But I loved it. Especially the name of the title. By the way, my name's Dianne. :). ...

Hey people!! I was bored and have a bit of writer's block, so I decided to write a short story. Really short story. Review if you want :) They all ...

My God. I love your word choice. Which means something because word choice really isn't my thing. Anyway, I'm pretty sure I've never met you so Hi, I'm Dianne! :smt001 ...

Chapter 3: Sweet Jesus “What am I doing?” he yelled back. I trembled with fury as Dillon appeared and started to walk over the seats to reach me. “I got ...

Wow, you're fast Quetseli! And thank you for the review! I'll be posting the next chapter up tomorrow, but it's not as edited as the first two chapters were, if ...

Chapter 2: Horribly Familiar Ignoring my terrorizing headache, I made my way up the stairs, ready to enter school without Dillon, for the very first time. It’s weird how many ...

Thanks guys for reviewing! This actually is the novel I've already finished two books on. I'm currently writing the third. @Quetseli, I started laughing when I read your review because ...

Yes, it completely makes sense now. And you're welcome, if you want me to review anything else for you I will, just ask me. And also, when it's the middle ...

Chapter One: Snowflake Voices of the students sounded through the hallway, most of them either excited or tired. Winter formal is in one month, hence the excitement, and today is ...